0=shoot yourself

10=Nas/Jay/Big/Rakim


Beat - 5/10

Quality - 6/10

Lyrics - 5.5/10

Flow - 5/10

Delivery - 5.5/10

Emotion - 7/10

Other comments : The fact that you used a punch in every 4 bars is insanely obvious dog, you need to work on gettin the whole verse into one take, or editing it so on the final mixdown its less obviouss. Your emotion was there...that was the best part of this, could tell you have some kinda emotional investment in what you wrote. The flow was kinda choppy based on the fact you had so many punch ins..not that you wasnt on beat..just that you came in a split second to early/late on some punch ins. Overall..nothing Horrible....decent

5.5/10

.pz.

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