Interesting, see i was feeling the punch ins, however as i listen again a few of them were slightly off, but i like the punch ins though it adds flavor and a continued attack on this beat. I would say that this is good work, i wasn't blown away but yer on the right track i can see a pretty nice finished product with this. Some shit was just spit out instead of expressed for the particular lyrics best delivery. Work on expressing a lil' better your emphasis lines in this song for the final. Decent Drop, i'll look for the final draft when you finish...1