RapVerse.com Community - View Single Post - [Entry Match] Hi My Name Is VS Lethargic

lethargic
AK's? nah, HP's the only time he's reloaded a cartridge
You spit like trashy old folks, and I've senior garbage
^^^aiight, but needs to be stroger for an opener 5/10^^^

You've met your demise. Hi, the name's Lethargic, whore
Put guitars to your lyrics and leave a rift in your vocal chords
^^^aiight 6/10^^^

Anally gored, kid admits he's assed out in confessional seats
Cuz rap's like sports, you're doin neither professionally
^^^lol, nice wordplay 7/10^^^

Testin me, and get left on respirators, take a breather
Checkin's true, I couldn't believe you made it in either
^^^nice first line 7/10^^^

Decapitate him, just to leave him a head of the game
This beatin's the reason he can't remember his name
^^^lol 7/10^^^

It's like the song you're name came from, his verse's trite
And if your sig's relevant than I should be braggin right?
^^^nice finisher, 8/10^^^

nice drop, i thought u started off weak, then came harder with each punch.

hi my name is
Our rec. resembles, N' that's as far as Lethargic goes
Ya wins aren't respected, When all were no shows
^^^aight, need to come harder with opener 6/10^^^

You just got here last month and postin up a storm
Freepostin Prick! I'm suprised ya not related to Thorn
^^^nice, but simple wordplay 6/10^^^

When shit gets rough, Lethargic applies the anal lube
He's tried so hard to be accepted...there's noneleft in the tube
^^^gay jokes played 4/10^^^

Lethargic blows, So I'll abreviate ya name with an L
L your an herb, That WL in ya sig stands fo Win-Less spell
^^^crappy wordplay agenn 5/10^^^

Ya screwed now, I'ma smack n' nail ya words...
Then drill it thru ya head bitch...L you have no curves
^^^wack 5/10^^^

Knowledge is power...It's time L gets a notice
L flexes his text?...Well his visions is in n' outta focus
^^^ nice 6/10^^^

I could claim a biter...But leave L's verse as played
N' by the looks of it...You did a bad job of it mayne!
^^^nope 4/10^^^

Everyone got room fo improvement...L just has a lot
20 lines max, so i punched my 1st few thought thru ya inbox!(seriously)
^^^not too bad 6/10^^^

I respect how you walk away as a good sportsman
Not everyone takes a loss easy...n u made it a profession
^^^aiight 5/10^^^

I thru the max, a complete game cuz he's no competition
Cuz the best part of his verse was the spaces inbetween it
^^^shitty wordplay 4/10^^

you need to work on ya worplay, an u got a few played subjects

vote:lethargic
case of quality not quantity, an lethargics verse was a lot iller

aiight
peace