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Old 11-09-03, 10:20 AM   #6
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born to kill actually surprised me..was quite a good verse
started off really nice and was quite emotive thru out

calda merda
really nice approach to it..took the unforseen path
seemed alot more polished and enjoyable to read...liked the convo and the flip at the end...really pushed your verse to get my vote
both flowed well...calda perhaps better...btk you just had a verse which was too basic need to up the complexity
good battle though