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Old 11-09-03, 10:42 AM   #7
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really disapointing ill didnt show for this...

anyway..
madawg...really good verse man
kept me interested all the way thru
imagery wordplay and the flow were all good and helped make this a dope bit of writing
it was well thought out and had a level of complexity concealed under what appeared to be a simple concept..at least i thought it did
best ive seen from yu...pretty dope kid only dissapointing bit was the end para..didnt work very well imo

'Rapid Regression, life spirals downward…Massive Depression/
I Ask Love a Question, “Why so much hurt, atleast Pass A Suggestion
^one of your stand out lines

props