Well, I'm gonna say this was dope. Your flow was short and simple, but it made the song seem a little better. Some lines could've been worded better. I would say that your beginning was your shining point. The end was good, but I expected it, and that more or less took away from it, but the way you depicted it was pretty good. Nice Job, this was pretty good.

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