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Old 11-09-03, 12:26 PM   #14
Thog Reborn
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Flow:Yaz
Punches:Junio
Werdplay:Junio
Struct:Junio

yaz...do this..stop with the -...and * thats old..then stop witht the-space-in-ur-multis..that looks gay...speacialy when they dont allways flow togher...k..that should help...keep workin though kid

junio..gets my vote..he had a better verse