^^ alcatrakz, you should critique every audio
you broke it down real nice.
this could be good, the emotion was good, the flow was good sometimes, off a bit at others..
the punchins were driving me crazy though, you can tell when your saying two words at once though, i guess bliss liked it, but i just found it hard to listen to, it chops up your flow a lot.
the lyrics were nice though.. i liked them a lot..