dont step to me, if u 'do-u-die', i rap full shifts, u couldnt work da '2-to-5', u scared a me, so u 'flew-to-hide', my lyrics so "ill" dey can give u da 'flu-n-hives'/1

^^^^um.......aight punch but i wasnt really feelin it.......6/10

Ill twist ya body like a pretzle, den a 'figure-8', claims to be on time, but hes pullin 'triggers-late', this 'kid-is-fake', got him cryin more rivers den justin 'timberlake'/2

^^^HELL NAW.......good line.............9/10

sez he 'dropped-outa-skool', hes 'lyin-to-be-kool', but how kool is it wen u gotta cry 'about-the-rules'/3

^^^no........whack as fuck....3/10

the rules are set, so dont come bitch-to-me, all da punches u threw, all of em 'missin-me', u losin dis battle, y duz ur sig claim 'victory'/4

^^^nice.........8/10

ill 'bash-ya-heart', leave u 'slashed-apart', 'grasp-da-parts' n leave em "missing" like ya 'av-a-tar'/5

^^^tryin to hard........4/10

im throwin smaks-that-hurt, to crack n smash-ur-verse, 'RAP-ALERT', this kids got his screen name in red to 'match-his-shirt'/6

^^^ok.......6/10

my rhymes aint calm, they aint a 'seditive', cant say i "wont" "kill" u, cuz thats a double 'negative'/7

^^^whack as fuck........3/10

u juss steal wen people 'write-papers', n to b real, i dont 'like-fakers', so ima have to rip u up, no chokin, like 'life-savers'/8

^^^decent closer...........6/10

final score=45/80
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do or die since u wrote so many lines i will just base yours out of 80 points

(1)Nigga are we battling or disscussion ya works hours…(2)Cause I kill ur ass and leave u a bigger mystery than Austin powers…(3)yo you cant rhyme with a mic so I hand you a fiddle…(4)Check dis riddle your played out more than Malcom in the Middle…(5)I’ll punch wit precision verbally slur you wit words that impare your vision…(6)Slice your temple in half so your only chance of winning is split decision...

^^^structure is fucked kid....punches are decent but structure killed u......12/25

(7)My punchlines are combinations of punches in every direction…(8)Your dieing slow from the High Invested Venoms I'm spittin until your found dead with the infection…(9)Jumpin in the Forum wit your blah blah blah shit man I aint scared…(10)Cause ya rhymes are like an exercise bike, they aint goin no-where…(11)After the battle you be like mary j wanting no more drama…(12)this is ur last battle and you aint going out with a bang if u was a suicide bomber…(13)My verse too good for ya so stop reading you might die if ya see more…(14)
Shit, you’re so fucking wack I could beat you with just the right side of the key board…

^^^nice as fuck i wont take off for structure again so........22/30
this one is worth more points cuz it had more lines


(15)You wanted to battle me faggot? That’s cool, you’re just headed straight for a kill…(16)You wanna wipe your ass with my verse? do it maybe it’ll finally make your shit ill…(17)this just half tha onslaught and you already dying fast…(18)…cuz i'll put tha metal to ya face like tha man wit tha iron mask…(19)matter fact,fuck bars,now tha 9 iz out bustin__
put bullets in ya cheek a make ya face turn red and i aint talkin bout blushin..(20)

^^hmm........decent i guess.......finisher was nice...........14/25

total=48/80

vote goes to do or die.....................no hate