Ok you have some stuff out of wack, try to start out with somthing a lil slower and also keep it simple. Dont add to much. that is what i did when i started 2 years ago. and that is what your doing now. lissin to some of my stuff just click on my banner or
www.offthedockproductions.tk and then click the music or beats link at the top and peep it and you will see what i mean on some of them. and also you will hear alot of sounds but there all set up pritty simply that is how hip hop beats are made. Your not trying to make clasical music where things are always changing and devloping. aight peace