in agreement with calda

deacon..you dropped a pretty tight verse
imagery was really good in places and it was a good read
flowed pretty good too

Baron...i think you won outta them...dealt with the topic alot better and had some dope imagery and word play etc

hi my name is..not bad but wasnty on a par with the other two
wasnt feeling it too much
flow was choppy as well..need to reword sentences to bring about greater meaning and for more relvance

! baron
2 deacon
3 hi my name is