wow, i could really see how you felt here. you let all ur feelings out, and it brought emotion to others, at least to me. I've always wondered what it'd be like or how I would react when it'd be my dads time to leave, b/c hes all i have. but i look at what you wrote and it seems like the worse thing that could possibly happen. the rhythm was excellent and u had a good use of words. all in all, excellent drop.