Bribe - Nice take on the topic, dope imagery/storytelling
and the flow and structure were all in places
metaphors were abundant and I enjoyed the piece (especially the bombshell at the end)

M~M - You seemed out of your element here, hardly any metaphors and basic imagery and a storyline ive heard on many a Jay-Z b side. I wasnt feelin ure piece and I could tell you werent feelin the topic. Keep elevatin though.

Vote - Bribe

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