nice pieces from u both....Pale had some good imagery...and nice flow....u both stayed pretty well on topic....talon ur verse was good...but it looked too chopped up and ur concepts weren't really vivid.....but here's a breakdown for u two....

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Talon
Creativity - Palehorse
Flow - Palehorse
Vocab - Talon
Metas - Tie
Consistency - Tie
Imagery - Palehorse
Overall - Pale mostly got this because it's a TOPICAL....if it was a battle talon would've gotten it....Pale had better imagery and nice concepts to his verse.....talon had a more "Battle Style" type of verse....no hate on either of u though....good read....

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