^^lol.....i thought the rose was a rose.....but it was a tight peice..the simple admiration of a rose growin thru concrete is rarely seen...so i give u points juss fa seein it...whether u saw it or not...but all in all a nice drop the flow could be more structure and the rhyme pattern dropped in an out but those are flaws i kno all about ...points galore...stay up -shi-

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Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-