yo thanx for all the feedback peeps and to answer ur sort of question formula I was tryin to do what u said. and also I myself know that my verse is pretty sloppy but I wrote mine in like less then half an hour and I wasn't really payin full attention to it. if u wanna read a piece where me and masta C collab really well then check out "High Times (feat. Masta C)" and "High Times *The Sequel* (feat. Masta C)" cuz I think those are our 2 best pieces together. and thanx again peeps for the feedback keep it comin. muchly appreciated. peace.

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