Although I dont much care for the use of capitals, feels like you are screaming.. this is really really good. Every line is unique, with such meaning and emotion... very impressive. For me, the entire piece flowed well.
Particularily liked these lines -

OUR POLITICAL LEADERS CAN SEND A MAN TO THE MOON BUT THEY CANT APPLY THE BRAKE TO VIOLENCE/
ITS TIME FOR A BREAK TO ALL THE KILLINGS IAM TIRED OF HEARING LET THERE BE A MOMENT OF SILENCE/

Strong message there.
The last line is also good, empowering...I hope you continue on this journey you have begun..
Great read, enjoyed this. Thanks.

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