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Old 11-09-03, 09:51 PM   #7
-ElocuShun-
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i got a catalystic verse speeds up, pain before it start,
my lines are so sick, leave you lookin yellow, like bart,

this was a wak bar double but ima still give it to ya
Breakdown]-
punches=007..he threw aight
sustainment=007..also threw in every line
flow=both..i felt x's aswel as 007
metas=007...the attic one by x was wak
mutis=ex
personals=noone
laff factor=007...jus for the bar at the top..was wak but funny
overall=007

both need to elevate a lot but you both got the right idea
Ex bit of advice....try not to let slip sum lines biggin yaself up

E.g fall back you don't want static I stay on top like the attic

nice little meta but....nah...that punch was way off the mark

pzz to both