This Sucked.......And If U Ever Post In One Of Our Forums Again For Any Reason, I Will Report It To A Mod And U Will Be Humorously Humiliated.....Ha Ha....Nah Forreal, Read The Rules Before U Post In Our Forum.

Jackass!


DoPeYz.

Oh....U Want Feedback??

Let's See...

Where Is Your Multi Usage? Your Rhyme Scheme Lacks A Tremendous Amount.
Imagery? Yeah....That's Always Good To Add In A Story. Do You Even Know What That Is?
Complexity? Yeah....So Uh. Use It...Please.
Structure? Ummmm.....Halfway Decent.
And Um......Wordplay?? Yeah.....I Don't Think You Have That Much Talent Yet Bud.

So Uh........Reroute Your Whole Writing System.

I LOVE Beef!

DoPeYz.