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IP:
The Jester Always Gets Executed..So Looks Like Ya Times Up,
....Tryin Scramble Outta This Battle,Jus Like A Drowning Pup
set up was ok,punch didnt really hit tho 3/10
Don't It Suck?...That Ya Make Up A Net Rec In Open View,
IJL Got Insufficient Funds...So Looks Like Another Crumblin Crew
assumin he's in IJL...got the personal therefore 6.5/10.punch was still blah
But I Knew,I Was The Omen(666)To Seal Ya Final Moment,
Smoka Needs Wins So Bad He Wants Closed Battles Open
slight play off his name/sig..not bad i guess6/10
Need Clarity To Undestand Ya Ava..Its More Idiotic Than Insane,
..Everthins So False Above Ya Ava,Mite Aswell Put P.Diddy
...As Ya UserName
nah..forcing your personals..punches not sticking here...4/10
Coz Your Still Tha Same..Jus A Little More Decrepit,Tonnes More
Lame,
See Tonnes Travel In "Brix"...And Smoka HitchHikes In Pain.
not too bad could been worded better..decent tho 5/10
overall=23.5/50
Face It Ur Wack, Claimin 'Three Little Pigs'?? Well I'm Killin 'Ton's Of 'Brix' (Brixton)..
He Admitted I'm Sick, I Wanna Re-open Battles?? Please U Voted For Me Bitch..
nice...personal.. good wordplay..even tho u fed still nice 7/10
Ur Rhymes Are Borin, Fuck U, At Least I Claim A Crew That Isn't A
Subforum..
I Can Tell This Battle Is Goin To Be Sleepy, Just By Readin Ur Verse U Had Me Snorin..
oooh good set up smoka...the snorin line is kinda played tho so 4/10
Like 'Fat Coc Addicts' Accidentally 'Sittin On Their Sacs', I'm Makin This Kid Hit 'Flatlines'..
Wack Lines, U Got Bricks (Brix), Well I Claim 'Sticks', I Guess U Can Say This 'Fags' Mine..
ok set here...nice play off his name and good punch overall 7/10
Ur Verse? U Started Wack, I'll Rip Open Ur 'Chest Cavity' And Give Ur 'Heart Attacks'..
Put Penises On Ur Rhymes With A Horny And Gay 10 Year Old To Prove Ur Art Is Wack..
first line i liked,second fell off a bit was a little stretched and forced 5.5
Take U From The E.R. (emergency room) In Ur Location, And We See U Love A Man Chest..
Pre-Written?? I'll Defeat Ur Planned Best, Tryin To Swing Punches But Ur Handless..
nice personal..ok set up..liked the multis..finished ok as well 7/10
overall=30.5/50
overall this was not a bad battle brix can do better...a lot of your punches forced in my opinion... and smoka has improved structure and flow since his last battle even though some of your lines are still kinda stretched..shorten your lines a bit
anyway obvious vote goes to smoka for better punches and wordplay
no hate to brix..i know you got skillz dawg...please dont take it personal
poll vote=smoka666
good luck to both...
holla
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