Aus-very well written piece good take on topic
smooth flow thruout that helped make it a very
enjoyable read. cant really say anything wrong about this one.

Fgee- sick imagery. metaphors where very dope, The only knock
i might have on your verse is the flow to it it was longer at the top and at the bottom you seemed to rush it to finish. it all ofa sudden it slowed down and the lines werent as long throwing the only bad thing of your piece. other than that it was very damn good piece


-vote-AUS on a very cose one..

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