both did good on this
bribe..imagery wordplay was good..wasnt liking the rhyme scheme i have to say...was choppy..but the story and content were pretty dope and the ending was a great twist
didnt see it coming

mystery...lacked in imagery and word play....a pretty simple piece
however the rhyme structure and flow helped it alot...was still a good read...quite a good ending to it as well
but...i think bribe won this with better content
although neither stories were original so to speak

props to both