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hey, for a new writer u doin prety damn good.I liked these lines:
-drowning in an ocean of frustration
waiting for my senses, growin steady impatient
trying to shake off this severe intoxication
observing the world and questioning my placement
i wasnt meant for this worl or this time
evaluating this error, i realize it was mine-
I could imagine it speedin' up like tha climax,really nicely writtin.Also the lines Gyrl quoted were ill too.Stay ^
-Avi
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