damn foreshadower, you shouldn't be so cocky, you might of had it if you wrote more lines.... you started off hot, shit was complex and well-written with good metas, but you gave up halfway through and made it too short - either ran out of punches or thought that was all you needed - either way, that was a mistake. Also, you got to remember that not all peeps are going to understand that complex shit, and that shouldn't keep them from voting - stupid people deserve to voice their opinion - which means you need to think about appealing to all peeps, not just super-intelligent ones who are going to understand your complex wordplay and metas... the best emcees can appeal to both crowds, and that's how you get those wins....

Dom-n8 came in with some hard punches, universally understandable wordplay and took this battle..

the opener killed it:
"My verbal ammo will ‘e clips’ ya cos I’m wiping out this ‘shadow’ like I’m the sunset,
Like a dyslexic you confussed & beatin by my first words & I ain’t even warmed up yet/"

vote = dom

yall hit this up w/ an honest vote

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