aigh't for a break down. basic rhyme scheme an ur structure was good. I thought flow was down but like realist said try not to speak in slang cuz I kinda feel the same way. secondly I thought this piece was lackin a decent use of wordplay so try ta elevate urself on that but u had some nice multi's though so that made up for it. but this made for an easy read so keep droppin. peace.

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