yo kemyst man. first things first. I know what it's like bro I was like 10 or 11 when my parents split up an my dad nearly died just before they broke up and as for me I had 2 older brothers but they never watched out for me durin the time my parents were breakin up and they still don't so I know what ur goin through man believe me. but anyways as far as ur piece go's shit was tight dawg was feelin it. let alone it brings back memories I don't wanna think bout but whatever just another piece of bullshit I gotta live with in my life that and the fact that I was completely on my own for 7 years of my life bein put through hell. shit sorry anyways multi's flow wordplay rhyme scheme and structure was all down man ur vocab was pretty good to. keep doin your thing bro. peace.

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