Good battle to both. T-Square, I liked the story, I felt it pretty much stayed on topic, but I think it could of been detailed a little better. Overall, good verse. Taktik, I felt you could of started off your verse better. You've could of got something else to get the readers attention quicker than talking about keystyles. Anyway, I was feeling the imagery in your verse the most. Gave the reader a good picture of what was going on, and the twist seemed to fit the piece perfect. Good battle, but Taktik gets my vote for coming with a better detail story.