Better verse from Taktik because he went into more detail, laid out more imagery and flowed very well.
Reading T-Square's, I was left wanting.
It was a good verse, but I wanted to know more and feel deprived, like there's a part 2 somewhere.
Taktik didn't leave anything out.
Great rhyme scheme (some folks just can't see em), great multi's, strong emotion.

Taktik

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