This was a nice piece fgee ... Abstract ... Dope ... Flow was off a one point around the end ... But it didn't bring the quality of the piece down ... Imagery was highly dope in this piece ... To me that was the highlight of it as a whole ...

My vacant stare advertising life for rent…the body free of charge
I sit staring at the stars…hoping to be one, brightly marked

Those two lines there stucc out to me the most in this piece ... They were very deep and meaningful ... I seem to be able to relate to it a lot ... Any way ... Keep writin' man ... Peace

P.S. Wat's the deal on that collab we were discussin? PM me and we'll talk about it ... Peace