Sounds more like a poem but still real shit, yo

-Good flow
-Liked the ending
-The structure was ok
-Some nice use of metaphores
-Alright vocabulary (good use of discreptive words)

Overall I enjoyed this piece. Keep 'em comin' dogg!



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