pretty solid drop
well done...rhyme scheme was good..flow on point
imagery was there in flashes...short bars minimise it imo
didnt catch much wordplay

'Cramp You Soul.. Worst For Best..
Damp The Soil.. In The Dirt You Rest..
Or Reverse The Quotient.. Divide Your Death..
liked those lines the best

solid stuff msan
enjoyed the read which is the most important factor
peep mine if u will