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Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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IP:
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Originally posted by Masta C
Ok...Work on your structure...try to keep your lines around the same length not short and long lines like you have in there...Add some multies and internals, so it helps the flow of the piece...Overall it was ok, but work on your stuff....keep at it...and keep dropping.
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^Word. Also, you might wanna up your vocabulary and use some metaphores to give the readers a mental picture of what you're talking about.
Now hit my shit up:
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