Nice drop man. It was deep, very real. The last few bars was reminded me of R. Kelly, hah. Multi's were there, just not very useful. Flow stayed on, I really didn't see where it fell off. Guess it was the way I read it. Vocab was standard really, could be upped more. Some imagery was there, but if you were going for more, then you failed. Content was dope though, nice meaning to it. Enjoyed the read man.

Every city that I mapped, I will never live down that label
I have never kidnapped, but I have just robbed the cradle
^^ Dope ender man, real nice.

Keep um comin cuz.

-Formula.

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