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Old 11-10-03, 11:25 PM   #8
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aight...this was a close battle...Nitemarre had some dope wordplay...but it was mostly played...without a doubt it was good...but i've seen it feel me....Pak had some good personals...and punches....but not much wordplay...but what wordplay he did use was pretty dope....

Quote:
From PAK N. HEAT:
Cuz beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker
that was pretty dope...lol....never seen it before honestly...

here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Nite
Vocab - Nite
Wordplay - Nite (because u had more)
Punches - Pak
Creativity - Pak
Complexity - Tie
Personals - Pak
RhymeScheme - Pak (personals is what does it)
Overall - this is a pretty hard battle to choose from honestly....but i think Pak got it only because he had more ORIGINAL punches...Nitemarre...without a doubt u came good....but ur wordplay was kinda weak....nice battle from the both of u though....good read....no hate....just a vote...

peace
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