damn this is long...

1st verse...
some of those rhymes were forced...and i mean blantently forced...i like how it started out but it seems like 1/2 way through you started to change how you type

2nd...
your flow was hurt on this one...hard read cause it seems like i had to speed up or slow down to keep up with the flow...content was good

3rd...
i like how you twisted it like that...the flow fell off near the end...