good drop. Got a little confused in some parts. That may be lack of sleep, but the parts I got were good. Rhyme scheme and structure were good. Structure in my opinion could be a lil better. I feel the confusion was because of me not quite getting the view of it being told. Sorry I didnt get it that much. But in the parts I did, I thought it was good. I'm like dat, gotta get the view to understand the meaning fully. I'll try readin it again when I get a lil more than 5 min of sleep. Overall good job, and keep it up. Much respect.