This is my boy from college so I know whats been goin on in his life recently and this is stright from the heart..........Very emotional piece and I enjoyed it.....

However:
You still need to develop your wordplay skillz and your flow was a little off.....Try to make your linez shorter.......


Emotional factor= 8/10 - basically cos I no how he feels and he got his point across

Overall=6/10 - no beef son, but flow was off, but altogether, an aiiight first open mic....peace

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