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Old 11-11-03, 08:29 AM   #6
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hmmm
mixed result here
seemed like you changed your style a bit
some lines were good but there was quite a few where i just thought...it was filler
hook wasnt bad and ad that to the flow and some decent lines its still not bad
but u seemed to drop off on this man..not your usual standard
vocab etc was cool..but some word play and shit suffered for whatever reasons in this piece
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