This was some good stuff. I find myself doing this constantly so I don't blow up on the people I love and expecially my girl

"let the ink flow, easing my pressures with a pen
close the eyes again, and slowly count back from ten
asking god for forgiveness only heaven could send
but i open my eyes and the feeling remains
dwelling in this hole filled with darkness and pain
restrained by the hate and my mind goes insane
looking for an exit, i find myself to blame"

Any mistakes I make or stuff I do I gotta member I'm responsible for it. Like I said good drop towards the end u kinda got off the ryme scheme and then got back on it. Word usage and everything was great. Yo keep it up. No one round here really talks stuff. All in all we all help eachother. Respect JT