interesting to say the least, it was confusing untill i did look at each character and really looked at it hard. while it was fun to find out just what the hell you were talking bout with each character, but it kinda lost the feel of a reg. poem, but guess you arent a reg. poet. hey originalty is what its all bour, and that my friend you hit 10/10. keep droppin-like the challenges of hard wrote pieces