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Old 11-11-03, 02:20 PM   #7
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nice battle from u both i gotta say....u both had good personals...but i think Born had better ones....most of Dom's personals have been used many a times...lol...but i won't hold that against u really....but Born did have harder punches....and Dom had more wordplay...but with old concepts...here's the line i think that killed it all....

Quote:
From Born To Kill:
Lyrical Soldier, but here's a switch, he's the one on the right. (his sig pic)
even though i had to go back and look at his sig...that shit made me laugh...lmao...nice line yo....here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Tie
Punches - Born
Personals - Born (more original)
Wordplay - Dom (just alot)
Metas - Dom (same as above)
RhymeScheme - Tie
Creativity - Born
Complexity - Tie

Born To Kill - 3 out of 9
Dominator - 2 out of 9
Tie - 4 out of 9

Overall - i gotta say Born took this mostly because his verse had more originality to it...and funny personals....i've already seen the ones Dom used plenty of times....so they don't have as much of an effect....nice read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

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