Thread: All It Takes
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Old 11-11-03, 04:26 PM   #3
Formula
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Flow fell off in places. Vocab was good. Got it's message across despite some flow troubles. Try evening your lines and don't force shit out, some of it seemed forced as I reading, like you were tryin to hard to get the rhyme out, know what i'm sayin? Hook was OK, the first bar coulda rhymed. Just work on tweakin the flow a bit, lil more wordplay. Nice drop tho.

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