THE MAIN THING THAT STOOD OUT FOR ME IN THIS PIECE WAS THE FLOW
YEAH THE VOCAB WAS GOOD AND SO WAS THE RHYME SCHEME BUT THE FLOW JUS GAVE IT A GOOD READ AND MADE ME WANNA READ MORE
YOUR USE OF MULTIS WAS GOOD ALSO........
OVERALL=8....GAVE IT THIS COZ IT COULDA HAD MORE IF IT WAS LONGER