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Old 11-11-03, 08:12 PM   #3
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Ok...this was ok....watch the ling length, some are long and some are short, you should try to make them the same size length about so it flows good and structure looks good...had some ok multies in there...vocab was ok, up it though...overall it was ok...keep at it...and keep dropping.
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