You drew some interesting parallels between past and present. Interesting from the historical references you made. And how you used them.

It was quite good to read. Allowing the reader to dig with relative ease. The unrelenting 'attack' right at the start. Using a kind of hard hitting irony. Really set the mood for the whole piece. Very well executed.

"poets are called rappers so we feel more hood"

"all the time we sae this is new
but poets of old would simply say 'maybe ta you'"

^Just a few lines which stood out. Though there were quite a few

Your approach was intriguing. Execution on the edge.

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