Thread: Addiciton
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Old 11-11-03, 11:57 PM   #5
Philo
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From: Imagine That!
IP:

well written.
had power.
that's good.
images were very good.
the progression from less harmful to more harmful drugs was magnificant, it was a well thought out pice and a fast one...much like the regression into the ill circumstances described in the poem.
nice.peace.
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