this was an embarrasment... cutastrophe easily lost this battle.
I understand why wang didn't explain... its not needed.
Your punches were unoriginalk and the wordplay sucked... grade 3's can come up with that shit. And please don't explain the punches in brackets after the line... if it's that important then do it at the end of the verse... all you had in this verse was multi's with shitty punches.
..they let you in a crew????

Anyway.
Teck.
That was the cheesiest opener that ended in the most lack-lustre punch I've ever seen. Fuckin horrible man. second punch worked..actually nice...would've been cool to see something personal tied in there though...
verse was marginal after that, closer..meh. not bad. but same idea with the brackets after the line, takes away all the effect.

Teck won this because he tried to be more original than cut adn he actually tried to punch, even if he missed a few he came closer definately.
also...cut... try to make your verse more readable, then asthetically it's more pleasing and better to read and understand.

vote- teck

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