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Old 11-12-03, 11:25 AM   #2
Funn DementaLL
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I rather liked this peice, although nothing stands out enough to quote it... you need to work on your structure coz it was real messy, you got ability to pull sumting off... but I feel you failed... keep postin' Raps an next time dedicate your thoughts more to the creative element of your scripture... uppin 4 feed bk on Funn's collabo w/ Monstar...
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