Good merkin by Oli...

Clearly outclassed the new guy.

Better punches, format, flow, everything...

New guy...you started out ok, at least ya shit wasn't CAPPED.

But ya went off track with ya flow and rhyme scheme after the third line...

What happened?

Ya went for flow instead of format, that's what happened.

Alot of cats think a block ass paragraph will help flow, but it's been proven...

It doesn't.

Keep it up, you'll get better.

Peace

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