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Old 11-12-03, 02:10 PM   #14
MyNd. FuLL
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decent battle but exec gets this..
heres why

wordplay=exec
flow=nite....execs flow was a little shakey in some areas
multi=nite
personals=exec...nite needed a few to help his verse
punches=exec
creativity=tie
complexity=close...tie as well


fav line=exec's

watch as ~executive Kruger~ brakes ~ ur sleep and you wake up witha torn~knee~/
bitch nitemarre spits ~sugar flakes~ cuz his rhymes always sounding ~corny~/

^nice punch here....liked the wordplay
executive lose the "~" and the" /"..its kinda newbish...free advice here...

poll vote=executive

had better punches and and hit nice wit personals
nite needed more personals...would have been close rot judge

hit this up guys
thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91144